What you published was actually very reasonable. But, what about this? suppose you composed a catchier post title? I am not saying your content isn’t good, but suppose you added a title that grabbed a person’s attention? I mean %BLOG_TITLE% is kinda vanilla. You should look at Yahoo’s home page and note how they create post titles to grab people to open the links. You might try adding a video or a related picture or two to grab readers interested about what you’ve written. Just my opinion, it would bring your posts a little bit more interesting.